She looks really awesome from the way how you drew her. Her hair and the face are so beautifully drawn along with the shading and detail.
i love the hair and shading!
Cosidering it's the first time you've drawn a girl, it's very very well done. Beautiful job!
Fuck A+ for this one! It's amazing
wow! lovely pic!
your portraits are very nice! great job on this one
outstanding job! You did an awesome job!!
i love the hair! ^-^
This is gorgeous. Love your Avatar btw!
Very good work!